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Jim Daniels’s Places / Everyone
8 June 2025


“Here is the subject so little revealed but so often dismissed, belittled, or manipulated by money: their ends already written.”
Jim Daniels’s poetry of the Detroit working class of the 1980s is of direct experience growing up here in the Motor City, where the auto once reigned supreme and now working men and women continue the gestures of manufacturing, reflecting little on why. We leave it to the distancing of the poet’s eye to see more clearly.
And Daniels, for all his nostalgia and homespun Americanism which hover about his verse like flies, offers us stark images of the people he knows:
Pee Wee has that automatic smile
for anyone he sees,
that smile, no teeth, just gums, lips,
pillows of flesh.Pee Wee been here 29 years.
He smiles that smile.
He looks through glassy eyes.
He pops pills every day.Pee Wee has an easy job,
painting lock-tite on axle-housing welds
as they ride by on hooks . . .
Stark and straight verse, and we do not wonder why one stanza later he steals one of the welds. This is not the slum-Detroit image that has so long plagued the city’s national image, not the mayoral corruption that seems its tradition. It’s the people working, anyway, working despite it, working because what other choice is there? Even while much of their work is abandonment:
An empty bag blown flush against the fence.
A set of keys in the middle of an aisle.
A flattened oil can, a lottery ticket,
a paperback with no cover.There’s a man in this picture.
No one can find him.
One character, who is called Digger, appears in a short series of poems, representative of the mass class of blue collar around him: the peculiarities of pride, the simmering of angers, the resignation to the responsibility:
Up and down the street
men scrape shovels against cement
lift them up full of snow
and dump them onto their lawns.
You stand tall for a moment
then bend down
and join them.
Here is the subject so little revealed but so often dismissed, belittled, or manipulated by money: their ends already written:
You, moon, I bet you could
fill my cheeks with wet snow
make me forget I ever touched steel
make me forget even
that you
look like a headlight
moving toward me.

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